Chi! She´s so cute, in the series and in this pic too. ^^ My comments are very poor today, but I have to say something, ´cause this pic is so pretty. Your pencil drawing skills are so great, I really like your pencil drawn pics. Contrast is great, especially the hair looks very good. Details are very good looking too, especially the eyes.
I can´t say more, but this pic is very great!

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Wow!!! Definite, obvious improvement on the hair!! The chin seems just a tad off-center, though. If you scooted it to the right just a smidgeon it'd be perfect! And on a side-note, she seems too mature for her character, which I'm not sure if I like, but that's totally a preference thing on my part. And as you said in the bio, you don't follow the series, so I can't expect you to draw her as "in character" as a rabid fan might! lol. But do believe me there is so much more GOOD in this picture than picky little details I'd critique! You've made a clear distinction between the texture of the hair ornaments, the ruffles, and the hair itself! The lips also have a very nice texture that gives this more of a sense of realism! ....I just can't stress how much better the hair looks now!! I am very impressed at how well you take and apply critique! I can't wait to see how far this is all going to take you! You rock, girl!

(oh, by the way, the link doesn't work, soo I just thought I'd let you know if that was important to you)

Nice pic! I like the way you did the hair, but the neck looks a little too thick or short. Other than that its a nice pic!

Chii looks so pretty in your style!!!
I love how you did the hair and stuffs~!! As always, you shaded this drawing very well! It looks so clean!!! xDD Usually when I draw black and white pics it ends up really dirty... Hahaha!

interesting. I love the detail you've put into even a quicker piece! Great stuff.

I think that the right side of her face looks alot longer at the chin than the left to the point of making the face look a little lobsided although this is the only slight niggle i have with the picture.

However, since the link didn't work i couldn't see if that was the case for the character generally. Also inverting is hard work so i am very impressed.

Yet again you have shown great control of your pencil work, shading, lines, tone and erasing! Stunning control infact to draw out contrasts! You'll go far if you keep practising!

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I think the neck is a little big - or least need a bit of curve.
Coollor is good and the hair as normal lovely - we can see you love doing hair.

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yeah i noticed, i tried to fix the neck a bit now....tell me if its better
and thank q very much yes, i love drawing hair (hair and eyes are fun to do )

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That be fine then. ^__^ It's a bad mistake I'm forever doing - lol. Sometimes I do so bad my girls end up looking like a guy because of the blocky wide neck. x_x

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