soo beautifull love the hair the expression the mystery that is said....lovely work

thank you !

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in least i can do,u're welcome

Oh wooooow....that hair looks AWESOME, girl!! (both individuals, I mean!) For the one in the foreground, (Ismene?), It's very crisp, detailed, and natural-looking, with just enough strays to add some realism! In the background (Antigone, I assume), I love that flowy, wispy movement!! (not to mention I've always been partial to brunettes! )

Next to the hair, their clothes are feeling a little sketchy, yet. I think when you do hair as well as you've done on the two women, it kind of ups the standard for everything else, so keep that in mind! With the clothes, see if you can eliminate all the lines. What I mean is, make every line that is currently there, either become the edge of a shadow, or the edge of a highlight in a fold of fabric. In a contour drawing, lines are perfect to express folds or wrinkles. But I think overall this picture is aiming for realism, not "illustrative".

Definitely nice with the vignettes, though (however you spell it)! See if you can apply that to the woman in the background, too, now. Where the figure is dark, make the background lighter right at that edge, and vice versa. That's an excellent way to get rid of the outline, or "cartoony" look. (not saying yours looks cartoony at all, but often that's what a dark contour can communicate)

o.o sorry that got long.

thank you hair i probably spent longest at (yes, that girl in the front is ismene ) so im really glad you like it. and i see what you mean with the clothes, thanks for mentioning...i wanted to make them flowing and silk-like, but that didnt really work out

wow, long comment! thank you again so much for taking your time

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*Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

*Hard work never killed anybody, but why take a chance?

of course! ^_^

Sara, its so beautiful, i really like it.

hair, dresses n everything shows confidence
keep it up

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That is SO AWESOME. I love how you do hair! It's great, seriously, I think you'll get an A

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I didn't like this book, and actually i still don;'t like it, but your drawing is really good

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